Today we showed Erica the finished script that we were working on in our directed study session, there are still just occasional things we need to tweak and add but other than that we have a show ready for our commission task which is great because we are running out of time and there is a part of me that is worried we wont have enough time to remember all our lines. Jess and Sian did really well on their rhymes that they wrote for the script, however we should have clarified the rhyming pattern, because now they’re different to all of mine. It won’t make a massive difference as long as the children can understand it and we don’t have lots of long words that are complicated for them then they will still learn. However we should have still discussed this. I also wrote the Paris song in the directed study session, but I don’t have a tune for it in mind so when it comes to making a backing track or backing music it may be hard to create.